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PrimaGigi
Oct 09, 2011PrimaGigi rated this title 2 out of 5 stars
Great prose. I just couldn't get attached to the story as I should have. Every time I read a paragraph it felt as if I was reading an episode of <i>Desperate Housewives</i>. No really needs that much narration about lingering glances and kisses. Simply write out the story.