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Dec 28, 2012pagasor rated this title 3 out of 5 stars
great book bringing in things that people go through in real life such as peer pressure, but entertwining the realism with a great fantasy. I feel like things could be more descriptive and could describe what the character was going through emotionally. I mean, there were atempts, such as she was being threatened, but it didnt look like the character was stuggling with what she should do. It was always like ," I have a plan, meet me here tomorrow with this item" I would have liked there to be more risks and such. I also think that her relationship with her boyfriend could have be better described instead like "I HAVE A BOYFRIEND YAY" and the character could have been more emotionally impacted when the tragedy in her family took place. She could have been so grief bound she couldn't think with no one to turn to. I just think it could've been more developed and with further thought could have become a series. THe author could have written a sequal. Maybe the safe haven was corrupt and the character had to find her boyfriend again and stuff.